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Thursday, 2 August 2012

Another short story...

The final piece for my Open University course, that was finally graded 2 months after submission, is now here for the delight of the reading public. I wasn't partiularly satisfied with this piece when I submitted it, it needs more work, but it scored 75 so I'm happy with that. Let me know what you think.


Disconnected



I had been talking to Jake for 10 minutes before I realised he wasn’t listening. His eyes were fixed on his iPhone, his thumb in the customary position, flicking across the screen. He was on Twitter again; checking out what the rest of the world was up to and paying zero attention to me. I was actually in the room with him, though I might as well have been a ghost. What a great way to represent the state of our relationship. I had been due to civil partnerise (or whatever our verb is for putting rings on each other’s fingers) Jake in December, after finally wearing him down just five years after moving in together. I had been looking forward to the big day for some time, and Jake professed the same. In recent days I had begun to question Jake’s commitment to both the inverted commas marriage and our future together.

Our relationship had always been fun, and there were hardly any fights. We were both either too lazy or too laid back to get angry which each other. If we did have a disagreement it would be about something as petty as doing the washing up and the correct way to stack the pots. I’d get passive aggressive and grumpy, he’d clam up. Then we would both end up fuming until we naturally gravitated back towards happiness with a hug. That was the answer to most of the unpleasant moments that reared their occasional heads. The simple hug – arms wrapped around a warm torso, maybe draped around shoulders and neck, perhaps even clasped bear-like, pinning his arms to his chest – this was what life was all about.

One of the reasons I thought that the online friendships were harmless was that pixels and emoticons might be able to express some semblance of feeling, but they could never replicate an embrace. Digital contact seems to have become the ubiquitous method of reaching out to people in the twenty-first century. It comes at the expense of tactile comforts, of real emotion expressed face to face with no screens involved. Jake’s immersion in this ethereal world of pokes, tweets and likes was fine. I had been on Facebook too but I refused to buy into the constant stream of consciousness and inanity of logging my every move and emotion for all to see. Once you consider how your reactions will be perceived across the world in type it changes them. Pure emotion is removed when you and the person you are communicating with are replaced with the judging eyes of friends, colleagues, and anyone else out there in the global village.

I stood back from the worktop and looked at Jake perched on top of it. He was wearing denim cut offs that showed off his strong calves. They were covered in a blonde down so that from a distance he looked hairless, as if he shaved them. I’m a sucker for a man in shorts so summer is one of my favourite seasons, when all the legs are freed from their cloth prisons of the colder months. Jake’s t-shirt, decorated with an image of one of Rihanna’s many, many albums, fit snug around his skinny body. Or rather, it used to be skinny, before we moved in together. Now it was showing signs of contentment and a growing stomach was outlined in the gentle stretching of the t-shirt’s fabric.

For another five minutes I stood in silence, watching Jake’s eyes running across the mobile’s screen. His thumb twitched like a nervous tic, as if he was a comatose patient considering a move away from the light back to the land of the living. On occasion he would titter to himself, presumably about some arch comment posted by one of the entities he was following. He used to read them out to me, tell me what funny thing Jessie J had just replied to a fan, what his German friend was thinking about Gaga’s latest costume... All of the updates seemed trivial to me, gossip between and about people I didn’t know and couldn’t dredge up the energy to care for. I listened because although I wasn’t into these things, Jake was. And I was interested in Jake, I always had been, so I wanted to know what was making him smile, I wanted to keep understanding how to connect with him.

Over time he could tell I was less and less interested in the revelations and opinions of strangers I would never know. I failed to laugh at the witty repartee because I wasn’t in on the jokes, I didn’t understand the references. So now Jake buried his head in his phone and he was lost to me for large chunks of time. Entranced, he could spend a solid hour scrolling up and down while I sat waiting for him to take an interest in what was happening in my world. And now as I gazed with a longing I felt in my heart and loin, I felt just as if Jake was sat in a kitchen in Azerbaijan rather than two feet away in our Manchester apartment.

Our relationship had started on the internet. That was part of the irony. The technology that had brought us together had insinuated itself into a position powerful enough to push us apart. I often think about how serendipitous it was that we were both in the same chat-room on the same evening all those years ago, both aching from difficult break ups from first loves. We reached out for some comfort to complete strangers and found future husbands. I wasn’t afraid that because of the nature of our meeting that I was losing Jake to another man at the other end of a broadband connection. I trusted Jake with a surety that was unbreakable and real. He had never once shown interest in another boy, beyond the physical at least. And one of the joys of a same sex relationship meant that we could share in the appreciation of a beautiful face, a toned thigh or a hot ass without recrimination.

We had similar enough tastes in life’s pleasures to understand each other, but we were individuals with our own hobbies too. There were plenty of differences to keep things interesting and prevent boredom setting in. He likes bloody action flicks that would have me squirming in distress while I prefer romantic mush like Ghost or Carousel. His taste in music is eclectic to say the least – Marilyn Manson nestled on the alphabetised shelf near Mika – while I’m a sucker for a power ballad belted out by a woman with one name like Cher or Barbra. There was plenty of cross-over on the Venn diagram of our tastes and I enjoyed exploring new artists and experiences with Jake at my side. Of late he has begun to take pleasure in constructed reality shows that boggled my mind. If he’s not talking about some tart off TOWIE he’s name checking some no-mark from Geordie Shore. It’s beyond me what intelligent person can appreciate this superficial nonsense.

He watches these shows with one eye on the widescreen and one on the iPhone screen. It’s pointless for me to try and interact with him during these sixty minute bursts because he’s too engrossed in the opinions of his followers. I have fond memories of when we would just sit and chat for hours about nothing in particular, playing board games or browsing magazines together. Now I find myself wondering at his thoughts on the latest cultural output, and because I don’t read his online utterings I remain ignorant. I don’t know when status updates began to replace regular conversation between human beings.

Jake continued scrolling and LOLing, oblivious to my quiet frustration. I had long since given up getting angry as it served no purpose except getting me het up. A general malaise had come over my soul and was settling around my heart like cholesterol. It was a familiar feeling. With a silent sigh I left the kitchen and retreated to the bedroom. I didn’t expect he heard me leave. There was a time when my leaving a room necessitated a goodbye kiss, even if I was just popping to the bathroom. Now he would only search for me if there was no one else to regale with a hilarious Twitter anecdote.

I sank down onto our double bed, the duvet wonky since Jake still couldn’t be bothered to make it in a morning, despite my protestations. I like things just so and in their place, yet as much as I tried to explain this to Jake he made little effort to humour me. It always felt better to be able to reorganise a room or put things away – I could control the environment of the flat even if I couldn’t control my relationship. I wondered why I used to bother trying to make the place look nice. There was never an appreciative comment from Jake. It wasn’t that he didn’t expect me to tidy round like a less neurotic Monica Geller; it was just that he was so wrapped up in his own world that he didn’t even notice. It was a quirk of mine that had absorbed into his own routines and thus it failed to register.

Lying spread-eagled on the bed I remembered how we used to cuddle spooned up on a night after the light went off. And further back, when we were just starting to get to know each other our hands would be roaming free, stroking, tickling, groping, leading up to a release of sexual energy to send us off to sleep. Now he would roll over to his own side of the bed, leaving me forlorn across the gulf of the mattress. I wanted to cuddle up and feel the warmth of his naked body beside me once more. On the nights when I waited for him to turn to me I fell asleep before my dreams are made flesh.

The simple comfort of body contact at night has become a forgotten memory for both of us. Now the last thing Jake does at night is to have one last flick around the mobile internet. First port of call on waking picks up where he left off, listening for the familiar buzz of a new message or email to rouse his interest. No longer do we wake up in each others’ arms, or roll over for a cuddle to instigate some drowsy foreplay.

 I thought that the novelty of the new technology would wear off after a while. While I lay on the bed I turned over recent events in my mind.  I wasn’t angry or upset anymore, and not even sad. Resignation was my defining mood, as if there was nothing I could do now, short of starting up a Twitter account of my own, but that wasn’t possible. Our relationship was broken. It had been happening at a glacial pace for a while. I was now feeling the impact of the break like a kick to the ribs. The worst part of the dawning realisation was that I still loved Jake, and I’m sure he still loved me. I didn’t know how to talk to Jake about how I felt without frightening him and pushing him further away.

Hiding in the bedroom was not going to help me work out my next step. Especially since Jake would not have noticed the emptiness in the kitchen. I got to my feet and crossed the hallway to the kitchen and found Jake in the same position on the sideboard, dandling his legs in a staccato rhythm against the cupboards. There was no indication that he had heard me come in, and as I stooped to lace up my Converse sneakers I couldn’t feel his gaze shift in my direction. Shouldering my bag I patted my pockets to check for my mobile and inhaler and grabbed my jacket from the coat stand.

I wasn’t making a scene. I was just gathering my belongings to leave the flat, as I used to do every day. I longed to elicit a response from the beautiful man in my kitchen. The same man who used to greet me with spontaneous bunches of roses at the entrance to my office and then walked with me through some of the less desirous parts of the city was now oblivious to my presence. I yearned to be asked where I was going. I had no answer ready. I didn’t know. It was a question I continued to grapple with as I left the room and then the flat.

I had reached the bottom of our street before I realised that I had nothing with me but an empty bag and my old Nokia. With no idea where I was going I began to walk. An hour later I was still walking. I was beginning to get hungry. I had heard nothing from my phone, which I carried in my hand at first in case I didn’t hear it ring before pocketing it once more, convinced it wouldn’t. I had walked and walked with no direction in mind. All the while I hoped and prayed to a deity I didn’t believe in that Jake would send a curious text my way, but no call was forthcoming. No text message vibrated against my thigh.

I found myself looping back to the apartment block, unable to walk further from home. I slipped unnoticed through the front door. Jake was sitting cross-legged on the sofa, a microwave meal for one in his lap, tuned into Made in Chelsea. His phone sat on the arm next to him, within easy reach for those oh-so important updates. When I alighted on the other end of the red leather monstrosity that had come with the flat I hoped for a flutter of recognition. There was none.

I cannot pinpoint when I first noticed the disconnection between us. It might have been the day he forgot to meet me from work because he lost track of time, busy as he was in a heated attempt to get ‘Kylie for Eurovision’ trending on Twitter. Maybe it was during the walk home when I tried calling him for comfort when the darkness began to close in on the gloomy back street short-cut I’d taken. He had cut me off when an important text came through that took precedence over me. It’s most likely the end came minutes later when my attacker’s steel-toed boot pummelled my chest, cracking two ribs that in turn punctured one of my lungs – just moments before my head burst like a dream against the kerb.

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