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Friday, 20 April 2012

Poetry (jrm_gwm, 2012)

For completeness' sake, here's the poem I wrote as my third assignment for the Open Uni Creative Writing course. I didn't score as well as the prose pieces, but then I'm no poet. However, I did quite like the finished piece, even if it didn't tick all the right marking boxes.


Admission



Inside my head is a phalanx of men,
Who are silent whenever I pick up my pen.
But open my mouth to speak what I think,
They take up their arms and kick up a stink.

Ever since my youth when I first got the urges
To see naked men in my nocturnal purges
The repression police that in my mind dwell
Make sure that they vet whatever I tell.

Editing my thoughts before they emerge,
Like a journalist’s boss patrolling for dirge.
They hunt masculine pronouns and turn them around
So no evidence of queerdom can ever be found.

Such constant pressure to check what I say,
Thank god for the watchmen who work night and day.
Seeking no credit or coinage as proceeds,
Laying foundations for future neuroses.

In truth it’s exhausting keeping up to the job.
Double-thinking each thought before out of the gob.
Much easier to offer the guards annual leave
Shut up and listen; give their work a reprieve.

Hush the critical voices of internal tutors
Let screensavers play on my neural computers.
Be agreeable, compliant, sit on the fence,
Don’t open that trap: it won’t make no sense.

The security checks I run on my mind
Have become so familiar I want to rewind
To the first time the sentinels took up their places,
Back when I fell for boys’ beautiful faces.

I’d destroy their need to be so controlling,
No more brain waves would they be patrolling.
Dressing them down to explain what is clear:
Being gay right out loud is nothing to fear.

It’s such a small part of my life now it’s true,
Yet it’s holding me back from opening up too.
A bulletproof shield I wish I could shatter,
Refocus control on the things that most matter.

That censoring voice is not my protector,
It smothers my passions in every vector.
Now defences are breached and I finally see,
What’s holding me back isn’t them

it’s me


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